The Good Soldier Švejk
(The Fateful Adventures of the Good Soldier Švejk During the World War, Book I)
by Jaroslav
Hašek
Translated
by Zdenek K Sadlon
I had a
strange reaction to this book. I'd heard
so much about it, living here in the Czech Republic. References to and cartoons of the Good
Soldier Svejk are everywhere, his character embedded in the collection
consciousness. So I finally decided to
buy it. I researched the various
translations—about which there is much debate—and finally settled on this one. Since I haven't read any other translations,
I'm not sure exactly where my critique of the novel and my critique of the
translation begins and ends. But here
goes.
Okay, first of all, I'm not a huge critic of book covers, but...seriously? This is the worst cover ever. Maybe they didn't want to use the classic Lada drawings because they wanted to focus on the grittier, earthier side of the story. Maybe there were copyright issues. But every time I look at this it looks like a nose-less, mouth-less, one-eyed alien with a bow on his head. And everything else about it is equally bad. Sorry. Why not incorporate the guy below?
Josef Lada's view of Švejk |
Now for the actual book Some
parts are absolutely brilliant. The
beginning is darkly humorous. I laughed
out loud several times, then felt rather guilty because of the direness of the
subject matter.. But the bizarre humor
and serious commentary are brilliantly balanced.
However,
other parts really drag. For example,
the chaplain's speeches are way too
long without striking much of a funny note with me. The songs are annoying and boring (of course,
I pretty much always dislike songs in books).
Other parts go on too long.
The
stories Svejk tells began to feel formulaic—not the stories themselves, which are
usually amusing and creative—but the way he comes up with one for every situation
and the way he frames them all in the same manner.
And
then there's the vitriolic afterward by Hašek himself, which really put a
damper on my enjoyment of the book. I
suggest letting the novel stand on its own.
Some of
the language feels too modern, which has to be the fault of the
translation. Or perhaps Hasek was just
ahead of his time. Also either the fault
of the translator or perhaps the e-book converstion, I did find several typos
and errors. One thing I liked about the
translation was the footnotes. These included
cultural, historical, or linguistic explanations that helped readers
understand, but would have felt odd if included right in the text of the
novel.
I love
the commentary on war and patriotism and oppression. There's one scene near the beginning where a
bunch of men are in jail for heinous crimes such as saying unflattering things
about the Archduke or making jokes about the war. The sixth man, "staying away from the
other five, said hat he wanted nothing to do with them, lest he fall under suspicion. He said that he was sitting there merely for
the attempted robbery and murder of a farmer…" And here's another pretty powerful line, as the chaplain and Švejk are going out to give a sermon to the troops: "The great slaughter of the World War
cold not proceed without a priestly blessing."
Also
absolutely brilliant: Svejk's character. Is he an idiot? Or a genius?
Overall,
I enjoyed it, and will probably read the next volume, but I think it's the sort
of thing that's best spread out over a little time.
Thanks for having read and reviewed the book. It was published when Print On Demand (POD) was a new thing. FirstBooks didn't allow the author any input on the cover. It was a stock photo they got somewhere. When I got the first Author's Proof and unwrapped it, my heart literally stopped. I thought "Where in God's name did they get my photograph to morph?" My brother, wife, friends, "knew" it was my picture. Well, it wasn't.
ReplyDeleteI'm sure you'll appreciate the cover of The Centennial Edition of The Fateful Adventures of the Good Soldier Švejk During the World War, Book. The scheduled release is Tuesday, August 6, 2024 at 12:00 am UTC. You will like the more and better Endnotes in this updated version of the book.
As for Lada's pictures and why they weren't used: https://svejkcentral.com/Illustrations
RE: "The stories Svejk tells began to feel formulaic - the way he frames them all in the same manner."
"Hasek's Good Soldier Svejk as a Picaresque Novel"
https://svejkcentral.com/Kovac%201#k
Hasek was indeed just ahead of his time.
As the Czech linguist František Daneš wrote in The Language and Style of Hašek's Novel The Good Soldier Švejk from the Viewpoint of Translation: "Firstly, in ‘The Good Soldier Švejk', more than in a great majority of other literary works, the difference between particular languages, their (social) stratifications, along with cultural, historical and ethnic specificities are highly involved, so that to find or contrive truthful translational equivalents is in many instances extremely difficult and in part simply impossible."
RE: "Svejk's character. Is he an idiot? Or a genius?" That is a false dilemma perpetuated by many academics and commentators:
http://jacketmagazine.com/40/sadlon-woods.shtml
Have you found the strength to read the remaining two volumes yet? :-)
Yours truly, Zenny K. Sadlon