Telling:
He was angry.
Showing:
He slammed his fist against the table, stood up, and threw the telephone at the wall so hard the paint chipped.
Showing and then telling:
He slammed his fist against the table, stood up, and threw the telephone at the wall so hard the paint chipped. He was angry. .
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Give your reader some credit for figuring it out. For more examples and advice, check out my post.
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