It's not just the words themselves that confuse the reader,
though they're often treacherous.
Example: I was reading Macbeth and came to a sentence that
seemed to make no sense. "The
greatest is behind," it said.
However, Macbeth was speaking of his belief that he would soon be king,
and was happy about the prospect. So why
did he say the greatest was behind? Then I looked at the footnotes. There it said: "117
behind to come." Okay, so
"behind" means "in front of." Why didn't I think of that? And what on earth is our crazy language
doing, changing meanings in such diametrically confusing ways?
The unfamiliar words aren't so bad, because our brain warns
us to beware. Then we can look at the
footnotes and figure it out. The words
we think we know but don't are the worst, such as these examples, all from Macbeth
(Bantam Classic 1980). Owed = owned, limited = appointed, make
love = ask for aid, scorched =
cut or slashed, encounter = respond
to, close = secret, minions = darlings. The list goes on and on.
There are also many words whose meanings have slid, and thus
are likely to kill nuances: sensible = perceivable with the senses (sensed), amazed = bewildered, wasteful
= destructive, offend = make worse, speculation = power of sight, overcome
= come over.
If it were only the words, it wouldn't be such a problem,
but even when I understand the words, the long sentences often disguise their
own verbs, and the odd constructions present themselves as riddles. Poetry and obscure analogies further confuse
the issue. The quotes we hear—the
beautiful, well-expressed, profound observations—are couched in seas of words,
words, words.
I know Shakespeare had to write these fast. I know he didn't have a computer to copy and
paste and edit 27 times. He didn't even
have a good pen and cheap paper. But
couldn't he have edited a couple of times to cut down on all the unnecessary
stuff? After all, brevity is the soul of
wit (Hamlet).
Much of this confusion is the small matter of 400 years of
language change that separates us from the Bard. His fans will say those who don't understand
are just lazy or stupid. But I cannot
count the times I've heard that good writing is clear writing. I can't count the articles and authors'
presentations and critique group discussions that center around how to make
your writing concise. And I can't deny
that I simply enjoy stories more when I know what's happening.
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